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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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Rigid Woods Seconds move slower than most would like to believe some count by the thousands but i prefer a pause of silence. Every half moment the world stops. I'll give you the thousand in between, but I'll keep the slow silent seconds. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
so many poems written around time. but not like this. this is a refreshing variation. I commend you. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you. i thought that it was a slight bit of creativity. nothing more. thank you again. [This message has been edited by young_blood (04-14-2005 05:59 PM).] |
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youcan'tseeme Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 88 |
yes this was shorter and sweeter than most of your other posts... it has a sense of difference that captured me nice one |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
this was very creative indeed....i havent read much or posted in a looong tyme..its nice to read your writting again...always different.....yet the same. ~karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks for reading karissa. it's always good to have you read. |
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