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Teen Poetry #7

Everytime

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-06-30 07:27 PM

So many people measure life,
in how many breaths were taken in all those years;
When actually,
we should measure life in how many breaths were taken away in all those moments spent with the one you truely love.

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Everytime I see your face in my mind,
all the colors of the earth, of the world around me,
seem to blend into each other.

Everytime I hear you voice,
all the sounds of the earth, of the world around me,
seem to fade away.

Everytime I take a breath in you presence,
all the oxygen in the earth, in this world around me,
seems to evaporate in thin air.
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yes I did read the last request for another person to edit and not double post but my computer will not let me re-submit. sorry about this.

SEA