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BabyGirl323
Junior Member

since 2005-07-15

Posts 11

0 posted 2005-07-15 12:32 PM

You meant more to me then what words can express
I gave you everything
It's these feelings i cannot suppress
What I loved about you was the way you looked at me, your kiss , your touch, the way you cared about me, and the way you dress
But now I miss you
Every second that we're apart
A picture of you will be engraved in my heart forever
You're perfect, in every way
I wish I could get you back,
But then again I don't
I thought about you everyday, shed tears for you everday
Damn, we're so hard-headed when we're in love
You told me you loved me
You showed me you hated me
Then you shed tears
But it's over now
Before I die, I'll engrave your name on a bullet, so you'll know your the last thing that went through my mind
Damn. I don;t know what else to say.
Baby Boy I Love You,
you got me speechless....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-15 12:36 PM

Welcome to pip.

I'm going to hope that the bullet reference was in some way metaphorical, and not in any way meant to be about "self harm"....

Please, check your email for a special greeting!

BabyGirl323
Junior Member

since 2005-07-15

Posts 11

2 posted 2005-07-15 01:00 AM

yeah. sorry bout that.

* shining star*
Member

since 2005-06-29

Posts 76
PA,USA

3 posted 2005-07-15 01:19 PM

This is a very interesting poem

-Smile, it's not a sin.

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

4 posted 2005-07-22 03:20 AM

I liked this poem alot! Good job!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-07-23 01:14 AM

Great first post...I look foward to reading more poems from you!

Welcome!

~Alli~

BabyGirl323
Junior Member

since 2005-07-15

Posts 11

6 posted 2005-07-23 03:10 PM

thank you!

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2005-07-24 09:38 AM

I liked this one alot. Good write. The flow was well done.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

latelyluv
New Member

since 2005-07-09

Posts 5
AR, United States

8 posted 2005-07-27 09:08 PM

Hey heads up! This was a great poem. I'll look foward to reading more of your poems

StarryEyed3
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 58
bostonia

9 posted 2005-07-29 07:22 PM

ugh i know this exact feeling! anyway, great write- i liked it a lot. cant wait to read more!

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..."
-death cab

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

10 posted 2005-07-31 12:27 PM

i really enjoyed this post very powerful and flows very well great job

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

11 posted 2005-08-19 11:15 PM

Good Tidings!

Welcome to PIPtalk! I hope you find that this awesome place is a family to you like no other. Thanks for a good read - very troubling in the end. I do hope all is well.

Welcome!

Jennifer

((behind this fuzzy haze I can see that we are coffee and milk mixed, perfect, but not for everyone.))

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