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THE-1-U-DISLIKE Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 20 |
hi every body, this is my first poem in english hope u like it there was someone called S.R.A He was kind and know his way I thought I need him oooh what did I say I sent him e-mail one day I can't remember in which day saterday maybe or monday march or april, maybe in may but when i talked i was shocked i didn't know what i can say but now i know that i was rong that's all what i will say [This message has been edited by THE-1-U-DISLIKE (11-18-2003 06:59 PM).] |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
uhuh....correct |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Welcome to Passions! What is your native language? English can be really hard to learn, but you did very well for a first-time English writer. I hope to see more of your work soon!  ~Elizabeth P.S. Check your email for a special message! Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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THE-1-U-DISLIKE Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 20 |
Thanks sooooooooo much skyshine, dertah, i didnt understand what do u mean by (uhuh..... corect) I believe that the poem is not just some words; it is a lot of feelings from the bottom of the writer heart, so the readers have to feel it before read it but I really really really wish that HE (( S.R.A)) read it and feel it [This message has been edited by THE-1-U-DISLIKE (11-18-2003 08:21 PM).] |
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THE-1-U-DISLIKE Junior Member
since 2003-11-07
Posts 20 |
i wana say another word 4 S.R.A i wana tell him that (I will never ever forget) [This message has been edited by THE-1-U-DISLIKE (11-18-2003 07:08 PM).] |
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