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Teen Poetry #7

To true to be true

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-04-03 05:59 PM

I never met you
but I can’t stop thinking of you
you seem to perfect to be true
like in a dream come true
at school I imagine what you look like
I wish you were here holding my hand
You’re my perfect men

We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom.

*DWIGHT D. EISENHOWER*

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-04-03 07:36 PM

I like this, it's cute.
It is also soo true!

I think you could have made this into something longer, but what you have done is awesome. Great poem, I really enjoyed it!

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curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

2 posted 2006-04-04 05:55 PM

i love it.
totally relatable,
smiles,
curiouse

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

3 posted 2006-04-08 07:11 PM

Nice write. It sounds like this is some person who you met online. the poem is short but defently worth reading.

Jessica

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

4 posted 2006-04-10 10:57 PM

Thanks for your comments.
Yeah I did meet him online. But it stops there, but a girl can dream cant she.

*leah

musicalfusion
Junior Member

since 2006-04-12

Posts 14
manchester uk

5 posted 2006-04-13 02:45 PM

great poem i can totally understand where your coming from it's short but sweet. all the words you use have a specific meaning
good work

R.E.M.

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