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The Crash ---PLZ INJOY----
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The Crash ---PLZ INJOY---- |
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girlskater117 Junior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 32 |
This one might be okay Im driving fast... I don't know how long im going to last... I hope I pass... This car fast... Befor we crash... Are cars are ash... And thats all i had... Is it that bad... And know im sad... But the person was alright so im glad... That i dident crash at last... Is that a blast... That i dident crash... By going fast... And now its in my past... |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
thats a good one short n simple Love me for who i m |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
I liked it, it had nice flow... A little confusing for me i'm afraid, for a couple of seconds i thought you had crashed, but than you didn't? I'm not sure if i'm reading this right or not, but i felt like you had crashed... Anyway, I really liked this one by you it was an interesting sort of read, i hope to see more from you soon  @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
yes your posts are getting better! |
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girlskater117 Junior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 32 |
Thank you |
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