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Teen Poetry #7

Resolve

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2006-07-25 08:28 AM

Resolve

I am unbundled
there is a part of me
that no one can touch
my whispers carry a strong
sound
I may slip
but when I stand,
the mountains become my ground.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-07-25 09:33 AM

very very cool write!

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

2 posted 2006-07-25 04:41 PM

hey i really liked this poem. it was short but great. thanks for sharing!

"in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop"

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-07-25 05:10 PM

"I may slip
but when I stand,
the mountains become my ground."

Wow! I wish that I could believe that for myself... This was an amazing poem! And, no offence, I liked this better than the other two I've posted on today! It was that amazing to me...

I think you did an excellent job of stating your resolve in such few words. It had a powerful punch behind the meaning...

I look forward to reading more like this from you in the near future

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the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-07-25 05:36 PM

"I may slip,
but when i stand,
the mountains become my ground"

GREAT JOB.. that was my favorite part.. I loved it..

You have a certain way with words..

keep it up..

~heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

5 posted 2006-08-11 08:50 PM

thanks you guys for responding. I really appreciate it alot.

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