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Teen Poetry #7

Zombie of my life

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2003-09-22 06:01 PM

I wish I was..
Dead
Death
eating away at every flawless smile,
eating holes through my hands.
I wish I was..
Alive
Living
Cracking out of my shell,
Breaking through the glass.
Breathe,
Sadness,
Excitement,
Never forget to breath.
The Zombie of my life is awake...

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2003-09-23 01:55 AM

wow! This was so unique! Automatic points for that! Such an intensity about it too, very well written. An unusual writing style it took me a minute to get used to that but other than that I was completely blown away.
~Live and Laugh~

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2003-09-23 05:59 PM

Thank you

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2003-09-27 06:17 AM

life and death...... nice combination.... this was short and sweet.... nice way of putting your emotions.... keep it up.
aussie

Why
Junior Member

since 2003-09-26

Posts 32
Middle of nowhere

4 posted 2003-09-27 11:46 AM

that displays the feelings of many people I know including myself. thank you

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-10-17 05:37 PM

zombies are cool.....

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