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Teen Poetry #7

He says (why cant you?)

Barbara
Junior Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 32

0 posted 2003-10-04 08:00 AM

The things aren`t the way they were before.
Everything is falling apart.
He knows you,
he says don` give up,
just trust in you two.
Everything will be fine.
But how will it be okay?
i didn`t hear from you
at least two days
and it feels like hell!
How would this be okay?
I try to call you,
but number is always: Not avallible at the moment.
But it wasnt just a moment.
2 days not hearing your voice...

And I wait for your msg,
that`s all I do for the last 2 weeks!
And it seems like you dont care anymore..

shara
Member

since 2002-05-21

Posts 69
florida/USA

1 posted 2003-10-04 01:22 PM

good write...

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-11 01:08 AM

good onnneeeeeeee (originator of the message "good onnnnnneeeeee")

Finalinsomnia
New Member

since 2003-10-07

Posts 8
Washington, USA

3 posted 2003-10-11 09:11 PM

Enjoyed reading it, hope to see more of your writing.

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