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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-10-12 08:58 PM

Say goodnight
Blinded by tears.
Nothing is right,
It’s worse than I feared.

But now I’m letting go…

“Don’t let it bother you,”
Is all she had to say.
So what can I do,
To wash this memory away?

But now I’m letting go…

All your trying,
Was in vain.
And all my crying,
Just caused more pain.

But now I’m letting go…

I can’t believe,
That I was wrong.
And how you could deceive,
For so very long…

AND SO I’VE LET GO!

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (10-12-2003 09:04 PM).]

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-10-12 09:10 PM

This was real good. Nice way of expressing how ya feel. Good work ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-10-12 10:07 PM

This really describes how I feel right now. Thanks for the read, it was really good.

"Worry is like a rocking chair--it gives you something to do but
it doesn't get you anywhere." -- Dorothy Galyean

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-12 10:20 PM

good onnnnnnneeeeeeee.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2003-10-13 02:42 PM

Thanks you three. I'm glad you liked this.

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

5 posted 2003-10-13 06:40 PM

Very nice job. I read this before...but it still had as much impact when I read it this time. Great write. Loves.

"I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..."

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

6 posted 2004-01-21 08:03 PM

Wow, this one hits way too close to home! Wow. This was an awesome poem! I really like it!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

7 posted 2004-01-21 11:26 PM

That was good and the rhyming wasn't forced. I twas a good way to express the emotions you are/were feeling. I look forward to seeing more of your stuff, as yo have talent, another of the good poems on this forum. keep it up.

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