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Teen Poetry #7

Introducing Gossip

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Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2004-03-06 02:38 AM

Hi.
I
m
Gossip.
You know me,
do NOT deny.
I twist your thoughts,
Open up those barred in secrets.
The vault is open,
C
A
N

Y
o
  u
Smell me? My names betrayal.
It's been a while,
I have been
       B
       U
       S
       y.
Am I annoying yet?
Like the BEEP, BEEP, BEEP, oF AN ENGAGED PHONE.
Just try to tolerate me,
you'll end up C
               R
                Y
                ING.
Hi
Im gossip,
Im easy, spread your....
LIPS and ill give you something good.
Don't worry I'll never tell----->
                        You can ALWAYS trust me.

Im a child.

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

1 posted 2004-03-07 02:53 PM

Hmm...a very interesting and creative read. I liked your format, but would it be better with a different format or no format at all? It was a bit distracting sometimes. Feel free to experiment.

This poem has a lot of potential. I enjoyed it very much.

-Leah

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