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Persuasion |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
The breath is effortless tumbling over sparkling seas. a song, a glimmer of hope The portrayal is bitter-sweet searches and siezeurs within. a dramatic climax, an ending The frustration is limitless draining minutes short eternity. a departure, a revision The dance is fluid motion presenting itself as heavenly. a dream, a lost secert The figure is translucent shaded to a pleasent moonlight. a fantasy, a longing The story is alone begging for more security. a confirmation, a continuing.... NJS |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
good write grasshopper. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Wow...awesome. This is the first one of your poems I've read, and I'm definitely going to be reading more. This was beautiful. I loved your choice of vocab. Nice work! *I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...* |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
How do you do that? I read your another poem of yours and decided to read this one. Your work is truly amazing. ~*~Hope restores broken wings; faith helps us fly.~*~ |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
First of all thanks to anyone who takes time to read my work. Second, how do I do what?? Most of my work was inspired by situations involving a girl, and Dertah can back me up on that. Other than that I enjoy everyone's sense of creativity and all of you inspire me; so I'm saying thanks for all the help. NJS |
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