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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2004-02-25 09:38 PM

Ocean Of Regret
~*Marge Tindal*~

In the raging waters of regret
~You are the tear
that I haven’t cried yet~
For in the wave of memories recall
I deny the tide of you upon my shore

~*~

Just a –

Passing
Outcry
Emoted
Moment

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-02-25 09:39 PM

...dare I say, very deep?
Marge, as I know of you, I know only parts
of you. For as much as we have shared, I
only know that this is one of your best.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2004-02-25 09:43 PM

...one of your best for sure, Marge,
really ejoyed the read.

jwesley

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

3 posted 2004-02-26 12:02 PM

This is really good Marge but of course they all are!
Love ya,
Betty

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2004-02-26 12:20 PM

Dear Marge: Very impressive! I suppose most of us have a regret or two like this one.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-02-26 02:50 AM

looks like this will be my second favourite of yours!
powerful words Marge

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-26 04:28 AM

....in awe

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2004-02-26 08:04 AM

Very good Marge. I've been there with regrets too. Felt like I was going to drown, but I didn't.

Deb

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-02-26 08:08 AM

Margie gal this is so moving and beautiful.
Heart hugs!

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

9 posted 2004-02-26 09:24 AM

wow...the short form makes this even more powerful...wow!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-02-26 09:47 AM

Mizz Marge, you're awesome!

P ~ poetic
O ~ omnicient (with a small "o" ~ The capital
"O" is reserved for God

)
E ~ eloquent
M ~ masterful

You really packed a punch with this one! ~ actually, all your poems knock me out!

Love & Light,
EO

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

11 posted 2004-02-26 10:06 AM

YIKES!!! And then some. I have read this several times this morning and keep coming back to it.

A COLOSSAL yet words of few poem from you dear lady.

huggles of luv, Marti

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

12 posted 2004-02-26 10:16 AM

Wow...!!!!

Eric

Flutterwings
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 288
Maine

13 posted 2004-02-26 10:22 AM

An over-flow of emotional poetic wonder.
One of your very best lady..

.. Keep that pen to paper and fill us with your visual imagery of soul. Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~))

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

14 posted 2004-02-26 10:37 AM

Marge/sis...understanding this.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

15 posted 2004-02-26 10:55 AM

the depths of the sea even in a drop of rain

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

16 posted 2004-02-26 11:58 AM

very deeply felt and expressed...good one marge

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

17 posted 2004-02-26 10:13 PM

Sweetly penned, very meaningful.

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