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Carnival Earth
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Carnival Earth |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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STEP RIGHT UP, YOU MORTAL FOOLS! TIME TO PLAY WITH OUR NEW TOOLS! TIME TO LOSE OUR INNOCENCE. Time to die without recompense. IF EVERYONES FEELINGS COULD BE FELT, ALL AT ONCE, IT WOULD PROBABLY HURT ALOT SO GIVE GOD A LITTLE MORE RESPECT He suffers. FOR US WHat ThE HeLl Is GoInG On? Where has that stupid soul of mine run off to? He's gone to carnival earth, my friend! He'll meet you there when you meet your end! I'm going insane WAAAY TOO MANY DRUGS!!! I thought i was in love.. but now im not so sure. Yeah i think i still am... somewhere in this putrid bag of scum that is me. END MY LIFE SOON, LORD. YOU HAVE FORSAKEN ME (and i miss you) ;-) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I found this to be powerful! Nice and good to see you...  ~~**~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
EagleScorpion -- Strong writing -- I liked the upper and lower case mix. I think we all miss our Creator and that's why so many people feel unfulfilled -- if we are very still, sincere, and patient (and listen with our hearts) -- I believe we can connect). Thanks for the write and hang in there. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"(and i miss you)" ~ this line brought a tear to my eye and a lump to my throat... Loving, healing hugs, EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kind of harsh for here but vividly done |
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