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Open Poetry #31

Cold

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-03-16 02:09 PM

Cold
  With flowing hair
  She said I'm here
  it's cold over there

  You're like a little furnace
  I'll just settle somewhere

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-16 03:02 PM

Very good Dave.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-03-16 03:10 PM

hmm warm and cuddly

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-03-16 08:22 PM

davie
u rock!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-03-17 11:45 PM

Nice writing...James

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

5 posted 2004-03-18 10:34 AM

I just had to turn up the furnace cause it is cold over here.
Bon

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-03-18 11:17 AM

Grover

Many thanks

Dark Angel

Yes but I was a little furnace for a bit longer

ink

I'm not sure whether this was being a rock or rocking - thinking of yourself, I would say it was rocking

JamesMichael

Thanks James

Bonnie j

Are you sure the fire wasn't turning the heating down

Thanks all

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-03-18 12:42 PM

I like this

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