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EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

0 posted 2004-03-22 12:48 PM

One
  Singular mirrored face
    InspiredJourneyedThrough
Ten thousand Quotes
    Million Music notes
                      We Drift
                            Agaze
Forever seeking
    that single unmoving
      irreplacable forever reliable
One
  Singular star
    to grasp floating
                      Tidewards
                        HaplessEstranged
    'Pon this strange forever changing
       predictably unknowable
Sea we call ourselves

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-03-22 03:41 AM

different format...very interesting...I like it

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-03-22 08:14 AM

Sea, where answers wave
in unfold, and salted tears
forever
hold...

Still listen,
sharing more...

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-03-22 07:29 PM

Unique, a very good write... enjoyed this very much!

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

4 posted 2004-03-22 08:36 PM

a different flow then i am used to, but it definitely works--fluid piece.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-03-22 08:40 PM

One
  Singular mirrored face
    InspiredJourneyedThrough
Ten thousand Quotes
    Million Music notes
                      We Drift
                            Agaze

I like...

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-03-22 08:47 PM

Very good - really like

Dave

EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

7 posted 2004-03-22 10:54 PM

Merci to all

Glad you found something worthwhile within

again thanks

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-03-22 11:06 PM

This one I really enjoyed. When I read it outloud, I enjoyed it even more. The style was fresh and unique!

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

9 posted 2004-03-23 03:25 AM

eternity's horizon,
I have read this a number of times now and find that I would like to have a library card to check this out again. This is superb writing. The more I read it, the more I like it.
Sadelite

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2004-03-23 06:40 AM

Hold the stem
of mirror, Venus,
speak well of all
your seas,
     walk the waters
       where father lives,
         then bring all home to me

Shells in hollow triumphant sound
sweet eyes hold mystery
hold the stem
of mirror, glory,
dance the seas
for me.

~*~

Passing the chips around...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2004-03-23 10:05 AM

A wonderful write!

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