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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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There is an echo in womb a startling defiance against chartered years with nothing to hold a fraction of never joins undercurrents that usher empty rivers whole . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemma~ This is so feeling ... does that make sense ? I just know that it feels so very real~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh my, im speachless... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
damn...showoff! grins 'Quantum materiae materietur marmota monax si marmota |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A fine write Gem Keeping it. Maree  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
nice. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"There is an echo in womb a startling defiance against chartered years" These lines rock Gem!! I have no idea if I'm taking them as you intended, but either way, some fine writing you've been doing.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Incredible write, Gemma. You have such visions. Love, Margherita |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
So much with so few. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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