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A Fleeting Memory
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A Fleeting Memory |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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As she read the letter she held it brought back a fleeting memory of him of their last night together on the beach when they were walking under the velvet skies As the salty tears rolled down her cheeks she could see in her minds eye a misty portrait of his face, as he looked lovingly into her eyes and she remembered the precious love they shared..... . . . . . . (This isn't about me or anyone I know.....it's just me writing......) |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
well it's good writing bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks Bernie.  Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definitely good for not being about anyone in real life |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Yeah I know what you mean... having no love life means I must either channel memories of the past or make it up. Usaully the past or past crushes kicking me in the but. Uhggggg. Guys can be idiots at time..... Juju |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love memories....makes me cry!  Good feelings stirred within this one... Love and hugs ~ARh Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nope, Dixie, it's not about anybody I know. Just some words that were supposed to be in a poem in a poetry group I joined. Thanks for reading. . Thanks, Juju. I appreciate you reading and replying. . Thank you ARH. I'm glad that you liked it. Hugs and love back to you, sweet lady. . . Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sigh....so good to know it's just a writing....sad and aching.... ~~**~~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Lauren.  Yep, it's just writing, thank goodness. Like I said above, it was an assignment in this poetry group I joined. There were 10 words that had to have a poem made from them. This was the original one I wrote, except for the word "evanescent". "An evanescent memory" didn't sound like me witing, though, so I took it out here. LOL Love ya, lady. Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
even when you are "make believing" you are still a love filled cupcake!!you are such a gentle poetess |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Gary's Girl, You could have fooled me. It was so descriptive and real! Enjoyed. Sadie |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Such a sad but beautiful write at the same time. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely expressed yearning image. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
looks good on you...but everything does |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You scared me for a second then! Hope you are well my cute little friend.  Love you lots! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ethel...Enjoyed. Thank goodness for our free roaming mind, it allows us to be or write about anything we can imagine and we become a part of it....Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ and glad it is just your thoughtful writing and Have a Happy Easter, EthelM |
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