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Among Roses.....
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Among Roses..... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Hush and push me among the roses a bottomless bed of thorns hush tumble with me to soil and root down to the brazen outline of petals that guard the path we took before I wanted us to weep beside them with purity of scent in peace and quiet. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gemma, this is an excellent write. Love, Margherita |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
very interesting write gal... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good writing, Gemma, my friend.... As are all of yours. Hope all is well.  Hugs, Ethel Mae |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
*whispering* ah, lucky soul -- always a pleasure |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"hush" "down" "before" "peace" ~ Rest "quiet" dear Gem Drop. Remember the smell of the roses, not the feel of those nasty thorns. Loves 'n hugs, LL |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sighh...beautiful Gemmie  Maree. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kind of aches to be among them so close yet so far removed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do understand your heart |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"peace and quiet" Both seem so fleeting... Well done. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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