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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-01-31 04:12 PM

As falling waters upon my soul
drown the hurt of those waking fears
a drummer’s dance tells of a toll
of life now gone with aging’s years.

I see the dance steps in the lines
beyond the mirror of my eyes.
A vision which creases, refines
in a picture of truth, no lies.

Skin once smooth, void of weather
endures the rains that fall my plain.
A time now past, gone forever
on wishes brow and not again.

My oak once stood tall and spreading
upon the knoll of yesterday.
My life now walks, gently treading
waters which whisked one’s youth away.

Today reflects a time never seen,
tomorrow tells of times unknown.
The pasture is smooth of grass once green
where seeds have been left, softly sown.

And on the fall of my own stand
a bud shall rise into the sun.
Another life given as planned
will boldly and so wildly run.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-01-31 04:21 PM

Very nice! Grover.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-31 04:28 PM

damn mag...such contemplation and conclusion here! I Love this!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-01-31 04:30 PM

Barry,
Excellent write my friend, nothing less.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-31 04:31 PM

"And on the fall of my own stand
a bud shall rise into the sun.
Another life given as planned
will boldly and so wildly run."

Wonderful write here Barry!
Your pennings continue to grow in leaps and bounds.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-01-31 07:07 PM

(smiles) Yay! God Bless You, dearest friend, you always nurture the youth deep in your heart as your poetic soul proves always in these most graceful writes! (big angel hugs) Yay, you continue to make me smile with your poetry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-01-31 07:53 PM

Very Barry! And that's a good thing!

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