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Awaiting For The Trust
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Awaiting For The Trust |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
Awaiting For The Trust Roaring Sea of my heart Flashing a message Again N again Cautioning me To face the dark clouds. Explosive and unexpected Serpentine words Making life hell Enforcing the tears To roll down Through the wounds Given by my owns But Making me strong To stand still Like a rock Awaiting for the Trust. ~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*©~~~~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Very nicely written, harash... I enjoyed this... ~Vicky "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Well done harash, I am assuming that trust is a metphor for a lover or someone to love and take you away from those immediatey around you... "Making life hell Enforcing the tears To roll down Through the wounds Given by my owns" Even if I am way off, I enjoyed the poem.. ________ice ><> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Well written! |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
thanks for the kind words by you all |
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