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Open Poetry #31

Ghostly.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-02-05 05:41 AM

Silence chills my bones,
like dry touching,
goosebumps down my spine.

A ghost in flight, the cold
glides in a tender breeze,
I can see the air I breathe.

My heartbeat causes the earth to quake,
I still feel the coolness of your tears,
An axe upon my nerves,
a noose wrapped around my lungs.

I have seen you once again,
my loving apparition,

run your fingers through my skin.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-02-05 08:07 AM

sends chills up my spine
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-02-05 08:12 AM

simply beautiful!!!

C?
Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 190

3 posted 2004-02-12 07:37 AM

run your fingers through my skin

perfectly brilliant

machiner
Member

since 2003-03-13

Posts 67
MA, US

4 posted 2004-02-12 09:43 AM

An axe upon my nerves

Great line---
Wonderful way to say it, I think --

machiner

God said "fear me"
rules say "obey me"
hearts say "protect me"
minds ask "what's a dictum?"
It's no wonder we are all insane

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-02-12 12:30 PM

Awe-some.

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-12 01:02 PM

if you see this Meg, I miss you

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