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Until Dawn
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Until Dawn |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Until Dawn Intentions are no longer the best, as nightmares take over the days and thoughts go on tour leaving me behind these empty walls filled with the groanings of old. Juggling the impossible to attain the improbable has seasoned the chords in me. My fibers becoming twisted connecting me to the darkness and the silence of each moment. Dreading the next, I wander this empty pretending to share and wondering why I don't. My world turns a prayer to song, a song to a lullaby, and a lullaby to a softness that leaves me thought-tied until dawn. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I dont' quite make it till dawn anymore these days, but I'm there for awhile too |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good images... a great poem! Grover. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Maureen....I know this feeling well. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great poem, M -- I'm pretty thought-tied myself these days! |
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