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Open Poetry #31

I no longer exist for you

nn
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 75

0 posted 2004-02-10 03:16 PM

I no longer
believe
The words and the serious face

I no longer
accept
The fragilities of the reactions

I no longer
want
To care for the absence of a smile

I no longer
take
The pity or the so said help

For I need no help
And you are unable to see.

For I need no help.
No advices nor untruth.
No dissembled white on my grey.
And you are unable to see
That help was never what I searched in you.

Not in that objective way.

[This message has been edited by nn (02-10-2004 04:05 PM).]

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-10 03:29 PM

Good poem! Grover.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-02-10 03:39 PM

Hit right to the quick.
Well done.
TD

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-10 03:46 PM

Very much emotion shown in this one.
Hugs to you
Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-12-31 09:37 AM

I relate

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