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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2004-02-11 05:26 AM


Suspended

I breathe
in breaths
that burn
from fog
high above
the ground
consequence of
a beating heart
with echoes
that bounce
in moisture
hung suspended
and falls
to silence
as morning dew
© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
1 posted 2004-02-11 05:36 AM



Helen, I could almost hear
the echoes...

Falling slowly...

Just to make sure

I’m going to check my window
early this morning

As always Helen, entrancing...
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-02-11 01:08 PM

one breath at a time, m'friend
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-02-11 01:12 PM

I hear you, Helen........hang in there.
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