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Open Poetry #31

ah no on ha

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2004-02-11 02:04 PM

in the five seconds between
lashes blinking
it's been substantiated in
undeniable undertones
that I am simply

yet I cannot fathom
the depths of such comment
nor simply swim the surface
without a life preserving
definition

so I'll simply sink
and hope the sharks
ignore me

-*-*-

Immortality is my illusion.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-02-11 02:07 PM

Masked Intruder -- what power the words carry -- don't sink; swim, swim.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-02-14 04:56 AM

Philip -- I can't believe this is not on the front page. So here's a Valentine Day gift for you -- up you go!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-02-14 05:21 AM

neat write

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-02-14 08:22 AM

me too, in need of definition

simply smiling
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