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swatcatpettus Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 57CA |
A sullen day, A sky of grey, A crow flies low, Low and Alone, I wish to see, The Color you have provided me, All I view, Is bland, not true, I WISH FOR THE EYES OF YOU! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice flow here. Guess it depends on the perspective one takes huh?...what is seen... TD |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very nice...  ~~**~~ |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
I like this one A Lot  "love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die" |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
seeing in just black and white is, indeed, pretty boring. who wouldnt want to have colored vision? image all of the colors we cant see |
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