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Open Poetry #32
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0 posted 2004-05-31 06:01 PM

About this time of year.

Black shadows of our sorrow, cast
  amongst
the luscious greens of summer
     yet clear sky fills up
the leafless gaps.

Hmm...
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iliana
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1 posted 2004-05-31 07:06 PM

True, and well penned.
Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2004-05-31 07:13 PM

Beautiful and very strong.

Titia

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3 posted 2004-06-01 02:36 AM

well done
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