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A Light Perfume
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A Light Perfume |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Imagine the lawman who flings open the passenger door. Out tumbles the body of Bonnie all of 4'11" and ninety pounds. A beautiful and petit young girl barely two years a killer. He smells a light perfume against the burning sting of gunpowder. Her red dress coated in crimson. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang Larry! You've got to quit staying gone! More, please? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love this "her red dress coated in crimson" Great images. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This speaks to all the senses. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 enjoying your writes on Bonnie & Clyde! This one was gripping! ....jo |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome!! Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ Realism draws such graphic poetic pictures~ Excellent~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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