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Open Poetry #32

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TheGirlNoOneKnew
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since 2003-12-04

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0 posted 2004-04-15 01:27 AM

This was a new writing style that I learned about the other day, with the beats going one, then two, then three, then four, then back to one.

Love
Beauty
Kissing you
Finding myself
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-04-15 02:40 AM

cool! maybe I"ll get up the nerve to try

swatcatpettus
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since 2004-04-12

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2 posted 2004-04-15 03:57 AM

Reminds me of Haiku

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

3 posted 2004-04-15 04:05 AM

Cool! I think I'll have to try one of these sometime -- looks like fun!

...jo

Sunshine

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4 posted 2004-04-15 06:09 AM

Very good. You made me go and look up
this type of poetry, which is supposed
to "look like" or resemble a Japanese
lantern, following the syllabic outline
you describe.

Ah, a new way to play!

Thank you!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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5 posted 2004-05-30 01:24 AM

Enjoyed...James

iliana
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6 posted 2004-05-30 01:33 AM

Good one -- these are fun, aren't they?

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