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Open Poetry #32
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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
0 posted 2004-06-09 10:22 PM


The time it stops
my heart it drops
the saw dust is goes
the tear drops no
one knows.

The feeling you gave me
is now gone the feeling I loved
about you is just a sad love song.

the blood it thins out
my skin it burnt out.

The ashes of my tonuge is gone
the captivation is all done wrong.
once again I just into the barrel
where its to deep. once again I crawl
into bed and go to sleep.
© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-09 11:19 PM

Julie, so sad; expressed well.... ....jo
swatcatpettus
Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 57
CA
2 posted 2004-06-10 01:26 AM

deep
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-06-10 01:43 AM


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