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Open Poetry #32

Winged.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2004-06-11 08:36 AM

Winged.

  White wings
         swept back
                 and held
in heavenly shroud of light,
the golden halo of a warming sun

*

The bluest morning sky
holds little cloud

*
Swift messenger of doubt
innocence dispatched
the cloak cast off in anger

*
Lofty winged missile
at home in the clouds
s
   h
a
t
       t
e
  r
s
the peace in the street.

Hmm...

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2004-06-11 12:40 PM

Er... I'm not sure what to make of this, but it's so you. I haven't seen anything in this style for a while from you. Good stuff indeed.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-06-11 01:24 PM

change the missile into a bird of peace........very nice work

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-06-11 03:10 PM

Very interesting read. It's as if innocence was taken by cruel reality? Give me my rose colored glasses any day.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-06-11 05:22 PM

Andrew~
I certainly have nothing but admiration for the author of this beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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