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In Your Eyes
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In Your Eyes |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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In Your Eyes your eyes are the color of want piercing the forbidden place diving straight through strength touching a weakness in me what is the magic of this hold it brings out such an ache in me in a glance that melts my knees "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... and I wear my sunglasses at night! Here's looking at you Helen, another beauty of yours! * S |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Helen, it's good to read you again after so long. I'm going keep bugging ya until you GET PUBLISHED!  You always so much in so little, I love this.Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
To have such eyes would be a great gift. You are a great poet! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I love reading you... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I was going to copy a couple of lines and tell you how much I liked them, but I found that I liked every line so much I could not break them apart -- really, really good poem!  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some eyes have that power I know of a few pairs myself |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
great poetry - very intense description of an amazing power that can control us - Paul |
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