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Open Poetry #32

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anawnda
Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 113

0 posted 2004-06-24 07:53 AM

do not look
at me.
i am just a hollow sphectre-
a memory-
that haunts
these halls
where once,
i felt
alive.

***

* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-06-24 07:57 AM

anawnda
It's a passing phase, but well done. Enjoyed the read.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-06-24 08:15 AM

A lot is said in these few words.
Very good write.
Hugs,
Ethel

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2004-06-24 10:44 AM

ah... but such memories and haunts are also the sum total of who we are...

well done...

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