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Open Poetry #32

Softly the Tread

time prophet
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2004-06-27 07:16 PM

I heard the sun rise,
this morning.
Softly,
the tread on clouds
in a candy floss sky.
The voice
slightly accentuated
just like yours.
I wished for you
to climb up,
behind my eyes.
So you might
hear it too.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2004-06-27 07:56 PM

Nice imagery and flow. Calming... Thanks.
miscellanea

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-06-27 08:12 PM

Wonderful!!!
TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-06-28 02:13 AM

Beautiful, and oh so romantic, Frank!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-06-28 02:42 AM

so beautiful...so big! love this!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-06-28 01:36 PM

awesome, this one gave me chills, oh the voice of morning! Extremely well done!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2004-06-28 01:39 PM

As tender and sweet as a first first kiss.

Love & Light,
EA

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