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Open Poetry #32

permanent ink

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-27 11:36 PM

i'd bend over backwards for you
so you could be happy..
the wind whispers my name like a death threat.
i'd bend over backwards for you
it's all for you baby.
drain me like your favorite drink,
i don't know if care so much anymore
air just isnt air anymore
just like love never seems to feel like love..
tiny little needdles through my heart

i love you

your name is written on my heart in permanent ink.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2004-04-28 01:28 AM

wow do I know the feeling! Very sincere write here, lots of emotion and I loved the ending line, very powerful. Well done.
~Live and Laugh~

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2004-04-28 02:29 AM

beautiful

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