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Dark Poetry #1
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Scarlet Lady
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest
0 posted 2000-06-09 06:39 PM

Only a part
Of your heart
Gets to me
Or will I see
Will it be free
To be let go
I will never know
Only a part
From the start
You give what you can
As I watch the sand
That passes through
Times hands that withdrew
The love you had
It made me sad
And nothing can be
Now that I see
There is only  a part


WELL.......

I cannot share my heart
Embracing only a part
© Copyright 2000 Lynne - All Rights Reserved
X Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-09 11:06 PM

interesting short lines, and creative ending
well done
~H
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