Failure (an oldy dragged out cos it fits)

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Failure (an oldy dragged out cos it fits)

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

0 posted 1999-08-20 03:14 AM

I tried to give you joy
Bring a smile to your lips
Give your voice laughter
Lift you from despair.
You said you smiled
I heard you laugh
And giggle too.
Was it all false
A faked orgasm of happiness
Or have you just forgotten
So soon?
Am I really such a failure?

Majere
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 32

1 posted 1999-08-20 01:31 PM

Failure? Not hardly. Good poet perhaps...

I liked this one.

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