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Dark Poetry #1

I have no face today

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

0 posted 1999-11-26 10:44 AM

They've all turned brown
And hit the ground
I have no face today

The fog is dense
Makes little sense
There'll be no sun this day

From native lamina
To lustrous hues

We retreat to our origins
Suspended for a time

I feel like you my friend today
Stripped of color and splendor

Bathed in condensed vapor
Raw to the root

Sheath misplaced
Devoid of customary cover

I have no face today

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Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-26 05:36 PM

OOOhh I've felt this way, Bravo

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-11-30 01:43 PM

Stripped of color and splendor...I loved that line !

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-30 06:55 PM

Wo! you have said a mouthful with very little words here. AWESOME work.

michael

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