| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Confusion |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA
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The mystery of uncertainity The hope of the hopeless The pain of the hurt This is my life These are my emostions This is all I feel [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 12-03-1999).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Short but effective. I to have felt these things. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
"The pain of the hurt" I like this line...please keep writin, i love reading your poetry ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Did you jump in my soul this morning without knocking?? I too sometimes feel this way. Well done ![]() ------------------ The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
I must jump on board....great work |
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