Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
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2004-07-04
04:46 PM
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To Do
p/u dry cleaning buy flowers read Tolken meditate
go for run return books love Eric completely
make love to Eric make dentist appointment
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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-07-04
04:46 PM
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I like this very much. Great concept.
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
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2004-07-04
04:51 PM
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Some things just happen whether they're on a list or not! Very creative idea for a poem! A pleasure to read.
miscellanea
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
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2004-07-04
04:55 PM
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Much enjoyed peeking at your list Corinne. Looks as though you left the two most enjoyable for when you have plenty of time.  Hugs~~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain ~
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
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2004-07-04
05:07 PM
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Smiling....
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
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2004-07-04
05:09 PM
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Corinne I have a list just like that. 
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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
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2004-07-04
05:45 PM
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Clever! Saying so much! Happy 4th, Corinne! .......jo
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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
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2004-07-04
07:33 PM
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Cor, this slice of life is a piece of brill from your quill!
Meditating and loving does wonders for one's mind, body and spirit! 

 Linda
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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
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2004-07-04
09:45 PM
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Corinne - yes, a list of this...
BC
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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2004-07-04
09:53 PM
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Corinne~
OH YES !!!
*Huglets*  ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
noles1@totcon.com
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
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2004-07-05
03:13 AM
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that's great!
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Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2004-07-05
03:29 AM
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good job alot of people put off makeing the dentist appointment. 
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Dark Angel
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2004-07-05
06:04 PM
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meditate and love more is absolutely what I should do.
Thank you Corinne
Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. ~Stevie Nicks~
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Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
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2004-07-06
03:15 PM
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Thanks everyone!
Corinne
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Cpat Hair
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2004-07-07
09:38 AM
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interesting piece of work.. those crossed off as meaningful for their ease as are the ones not for their commitment.....
enjoyed as always Cor... hope the world is being kind to you and that you are indeed well...
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Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
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Mobile, AL
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2004-07-07
08:27 PM
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I don't think I've ever read poetry this way at all. Its funny, but I think of everything I write down as having the potential to be or inspire poetry, but I have never thought to use it in the way you have here. This is just awesome!All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill
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Martie
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California
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2004-07-07
11:50 PM
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Corinne
Very creative...!!
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