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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I run I hide And still you find me Alone I fade Alone I weep And yet you won't let me go Still I find shadows Still I test the deep But your face is always there Hurt I bleed Pain never ending Yet still you cling Scars that won't fade Cuts that won't heal Callous inflictions of your love I run I hide Still...you find me |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Paula, I felt this. This cuts deep. very well done, and hugs to you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Paula, maybe it's time to wear a garlic necklace?  Hugs to you. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I run I hide And still you find me Alone I fade Alone I weep And yet you won't let me go Still I find shadows Still I test the deep But your face is always there" oh I like this one a lot  |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Maybe you can get into a witness protection program?  -glider- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice writing paula..thank you.. Goldenrose. Buffalo girl won't you come out tonight..come out tonight...(George Bailey~It's A Wonderful Life) |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good writing, sad but good |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good write, could almost visulize you running Liked the format as well. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thanks y'all and Glider? LMAO at the Witness Protection Program |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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