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Upon Nights Such As This
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Upon Nights Such As This |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Upon Nights Such As This Writing what came to mind Here deep into the night Just pondering thoughts Wondering what to write So many sweet memories While I laid upon my bed My thoughts turn to you I think of things you said When stars light up the sky Its your presence I miss Yearning your company Upon nights such as this Wish you were here tonight A magical moon beams As I drift asleep longingly Embracing you in dreams Hope©2004 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hope I can see that you haven't lost your magical touch. This was simply beautiful. I hope all is well in your life. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful in it's content written in a very smooth flow. Nights like these, anyone would want to be over with. You capture the yearning gracefully but completely. Well done. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
this brought saddened tears to my eyes, thank you for expressing these heartfelt feelings. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
oh, smooooth write! love&light, **babygirL** |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you all for your kind , caring , thoughtful replies ....they are so much appreciated Hugs hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how beautiful! |
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