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Open Poetry #33
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EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
0 posted 2004-10-15 10:05 AM

I know you may not want to see me,
On your waydown
Fromtheclouds.
Would you hearme
if  told you
That my heart is with you now?
© Copyright 2004 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2004-10-15 10:52 AM

I would say hear you and feel your every beat.  You conveyed this quite well in such a short verse.  Me ... well I am long winded lol.  Enjoyed.
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-10-15 10:56 AM

Much enjoyed this one...
short but with a powerful message.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
3 posted 2004-10-15 11:11 AM

beautiful!!!!!
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
4 posted 2004-10-15 03:08 PM

been awhile since i've seen you on these pages, great write, short and moving
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