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Open Poetry #33

"I almost gave up"

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-10-17 01:18 AM

I'll kill my self with this work
for I want to save the world
-I am naked on the floor
plucking the shattered bone pieces
out of what was my knee cap.
I am alone and Tired.
I almost gave it all up
Because It was just to hard
Little did I KNOW what's hard.
Hard is self limitation.

Juju

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

1 posted 2004-10-17 01:23 AM

this poem had a depth to it,the kind that makes me think,the kind i love.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2004-10-17 01:28 AM

Thank you. Collage is tough/

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

3 posted 2004-10-17 03:15 AM

It makes you strong. And its so worth it- I don't need to tell you that - but I am finally reaping the rewards of my education.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-17 05:38 AM

hang in there...you can do it

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2004-10-17 10:54 AM

Thank you.

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