Short Moods17 (beyond despair)

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Open Poetry #33

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2004-10-19 03:48 AM

pain's sharp fingers
do not know the value of breath
when loneliness like this comes.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

Robert Joseph
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since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

1 posted 2004-10-19 04:09 AM

Jennifer,
In brevity you give way to vast emotion.

Robert Joseph

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-10-19 05:26 AM

well described

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2004-10-19 06:43 PM

Hey Jen.

nodding now

It does just that, doesn't it.

I leave you with hugs.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-10-19 08:18 PM

Fantastic...James

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2004-10-19 08:37 PM

Yes...you know it well. Wonderfully written.

jwesley

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-10-19 09:07 PM

Perfectly expressed Jennifer, short, sweet
and powerful.

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