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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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silence ambushed them, like a vulture upon its hapless prey they committed pretense to binding the holes in their relationship he fed her bliss in front of everyone's adoring eyes a lovey dovey picture of unemoted loss |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
kaile Enjoyed the read. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanks Seymour...  |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
what a way to put it!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda sad I look at people sometimes and I wonder if they are truly happy and what goes on behind closed doors... being in my position at work, I often find out what goes on really, and it's sad |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
kaile! how well your words have depicted this truth....it's kind of slithery, too... keeping it... ~K~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanks RobertB for the exclamations hi Dixie, i wonder too. guess this musing is a product of my curiosity. sorry that this has left you feeling melancholy gosh, Kahlil, what an honour. i'm truly flattered |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 a tight clean write |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have been saddened by witnessing similar scenarios. i.e. the unexpected pronouncement of the "perfect couple" splitting up! All that glitters is not necessarily golden.  Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Too often, true. Makes me sick. Great right, kaile! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Too true this, and so sad. Well written. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
kaile - thought provoking words I read here. Great write... BC |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hi K.. I'm rarely here anymore so I'm very glad to see this gem of minimalism. Hugs, hope you're ok...  K |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice work... very nice indeed!!! |
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