| Open Poetry #34 |
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Between the Lines |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan
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In morning light we meet each other. I coming out. You going in returning young children to their resting mother; an evening spent, as was her wish, around myself, another man than you who talks of auto parts while I return with equal calm: words beside the myth dispelled, a truth our ages know. No man goes where a woman goes no matter how he tries. We understand: your past neglect, my none the less affectionate, is but between the difference in how we treat the lie. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Interesting. Just the other night it was spoken how women have this connection that a man just cannot tap into no matter how hard he tries - perhaps more so than the men's club women always speak of - I think it is merely the nature of the sex - and that even so, man and woman are a compliment to one another - each a little less without the other - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
wow. very good write. even better read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
We understand: your past neglect, my none the less affectionate, is but between the difference in how we treat the lie. By the way..I am "Between the Lines" sighing~~~until my recent years...I believed we did understand one another... Then starting over you realize...it was never so M |
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