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Open Poetry #34
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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
0 posted 2004-11-21 01:56 AM


touch:

impression
feels
indescribable

sense it...

tingling,
flowing,
flesh,

sporatic
excitement

collum anatomicum,

warmth

felt...

pulsing
pumping
pounding

a call...
a plea...

kiss me
hold me
closer
warmer

breathe

feel

touch...
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-11-21 02:42 PM

Passion, rendered softly.

Beautiful.

Love, Margherita
*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
2 posted 2004-11-21 05:38 PM

Nice write Derrick!

~Alli~

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