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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Good prayers with flaxen tiles Folding my fingers one by one Consciousness was listening, to…. Personal charts reexamined Like Doppler hatching a riddle of mid-day Memories exist, outside of meaning Ones which belonged to me... Taking new shape for namesake Leaving the first lick of candied taste All-knowing love mail Dare I mention... Resonating heart space Wondering what good spirit was with me today? I made a list of qualities You know the ones... Wearing speakeasy messages Reaching an unknown crossroad Milkweed with rhyming muscle Lives long enough to develop a mythos Collecting hoards of strong thighs Becoming a constant opponent Of quarrel If I’d been lost in the woods I’d have froze that December Instead, my mind committed suicide But decided it was unorthodox & impractical Instead, flying colors landed on my shoulder Telling me about tropical orchards Refined June bugs fell Like pages from a calendar Into some cloudless scheme Writing meaning Into my needs Like a meat encasing With bizarre imagery To a point of vision Locking safe-hand thickenings Admitting an irreversible cadence Transforming nostalgia into present day Fostering thoughts at the end of my mind Into hurry home paths |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Transforming nostalgia into present day Fostering thoughts at the end of the mind Into hurry home paths" Wonderful wonder-filled write Lee! Amazing..like poems within poems. Much enjoyed the read this morn. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j, some soft soothed sidewalk footfall quiet with welcome home gingerbread and slow dance shoulders just around the corner there at your eye edge waiting enjoyed you here ms |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'Wondering what good spirit was with me today?' Oh my dear poetess ... no doubt in my mind that it was the Spirit-of-Tender-Remember~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Memories existed, outside of meaning Ones which belonged to me…. Taking new shapes for namesake Leaving the first lick of candied taste All-knowing love mail Dare I mention…. Resonating heart space This write has such a loveliness to it Lee...beautiful my friend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I bet you dream in technicolor as well!  Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very poetic philosophy of ones own journey through life. You have another masterpiece of work here Lee J. Enjoyed. JL [This message has been edited by JL (11-23-2004 02:16 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You have a magic pen. Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Resonating heart space You do acrobatics with words, dear Lee. Simply amazing images. Love, Margherita |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great writing, I enjoyed this read. Jason |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! what a mind scrambler! awesome stuff! |
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